{"id":559,"date":"2011-10-14T16:41:58","date_gmt":"2011-10-15T00:41:58","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/stevenrbrandt.com\/wordpress\/?p=559"},"modified":"2011-10-14T16:48:31","modified_gmt":"2011-10-15T00:48:31","slug":"finding-the-story","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/stevenrbrandt.com\/?p=559","title":{"rendered":"Finding The Story"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Writing is a tough process. I sit down try to write out a rough plan of the story, then start writing scenes. Frequently my ideas for scenes don&#8217;t work, or when I figure out a way to make them work the story takes off in a new direction. The first attempt at writing the novel winds up being just a collection of random ideas and it takes 3 or 4 passes to get something passable from it. The process is long and painful.<\/p>\n<p>Recently I&#8217;ve become a fan of <a href=\"http:\/\/storyfix.com\">http:StoryFix.com<\/a>. I&#8217;ve been dutifully digesting Larry Brooks&#8217; advice on story structure, but only recently have I discovered his advice about the &#8220;beat sheet.&#8221; What is the beat sheet? Just a list of scenes. You fill in 12 to 14 of them for each of the four parts of your novel, then you start writing.<\/p>\n<p>Now I admit, on the face of it, it doesn&#8217;t sound like much. In fact, I&#8217;ve tried this kind of thing before and it hasn&#8217;t worked well. But I was missing one ingredient: <i>The Mission.<\/i><\/p>\n<p>The &#8220;Mission&#8221; tells you how to write a one sentence description of a scene that actually works. Larry Brooks says that the mission is about the information that the scene imparts, something important to the story. The test of whether a scene has a mission, he says, is whether (after reading the scene) a reader can tell why that scene is in the story. Knowing the mission of a scene is the key to writing a one sentence description that works.<\/p>\n<p>Now I can write these one sentence scenes and move them around, and the process feels a lot like my much longer more painful process of finding my story but vastly accelerated.<\/p>\n<p>How do I put this together with Larry&#8217;s other advice on story structure? For me, I work in both directions. I fill in the plot points, theme, etc. if I can, then I jump to the beat sheet, then back. It&#8217;s like my previous, much longer and more painful process, but the story outline feels so much stronger.<\/p>\n<p>While I&#8217;m in the early part of finding the story I don&#8217;t worry so much about getting the scenes into collections of 12 to 14. That&#8217;s a longer term goal. Will all this help me to write a novel in one draft? Well, we&#8217;ll see. I am about half way through creating my beat sheet for my next novel and in November I&#8217;m going to put this theory to the test. 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